>>33118121
>[x]Sportsman response

Let's take the high ground here.

>>33118121
[]Sportsman response

>>33118121
>[]One last snipe
Time to burn the thread down

>>33118121
>[]Sportsman response
Be the bigger man.

sportsman response

>>33118121
>[]Sportsman response

>>33118121
>[]Sportsman response

>>33118121
[]Sportsman response

>>33118220
Try to take your lost like an adult please. Sure I voted for Ada, but being hung up on past things is pointless. I'd rather hope that Rein won't be as restrictive as some fear.

>>33118121
[x]Sportsman response

>>33118121
[]Sportsman response

>>33118121
>[]Sportsman response

>>33118121
>“I know what I shall call her. Your name will be Reinforce.” you declare.
Period at the end of dialogue, abruptly switching between characters spoken to without any indication.

>Ok suit up and go out there.” Ms Foss responds.
Awful dialogue flow, and mispunctuated again.

>You start to climb into the Maeve. Quite different compared to the Morgan, where the Morgan felt more like armor, the Maeve flows more over you with very little in the way of restrictions on movement.

Better, but probably just because there were less ways to fuck this one up. It's still a run on and flows awfully. A simple fix would be replacing the comma after 'compared to the Morgan,' with a perior, and starting the rest as its own sentence.

>“Yes everything is fine. We've been at this too long. Time to go kick some British ass.” you respond.

The only time you end a dialogue with a period is if it ends the paragraph. If there are following words, use a comma. Exclamation marks and question marks also work. But never a period.

>“Oh so you didn't run away.” Cecilia says with that prideful tone.

Same problem. Shitty flow too.

OP, is English not your first language? If not, that's okay, we can work with this. If it is, you're an illiterate fuckwit and need to fix your shit. Your story is painful to read on a purely technical level. Read your dialogue aloud to yourself. If you stop to take a breath or for flow, put a comma there. Punctuate the end of dialogue properly. Avoid run-on sentences.

tl;dr you suck at writing on a purely technical level, fix this or go back to ff.net.

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[]Sportsman response

“Let's have a good match Cecilia. We should be examples to the rest of the student body” you respond coolly, trying to ignore the stadium full of people below you watching your every move.

“Oh yes, that is right. It is befitting of our station after all.” she responds with a slight flustered tone.

“Alright John, you are up against Blue Tears from BAE. This is the IS the United Kingdom has decided to support as their next gen IS, a unit that favors long ranged combat. The exact ability of the One-off has something do to with remote control but no solid evidence yet.” you hear Walken over the Intercom.

After what seems like an hour the buzzer finally rings to announce the start of the match.

[]Press the attack full speed ahead.
[]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

>>33118502
>[x]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

I'd imagine she'd expect something more normal like a rushing attack, but attacking her in line of her speciality? She won't see it coming.

>>33118502
>[]Press the attack full speed ahead.

Float like a VTOL sting like a tank.

>>33118502
>[]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower
Since we're now a hyperspecialized sniper, we should do this.

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>>33118502
>[]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

Going in hot with the 2nd amendment!

>>33118502
>[]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

>>33118502
>[X]Press the attack full speed ahead.

Hit her with a railgun shot at point blank range.

>>33118502
>[]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

>>33118540
let's not assume things just yet, there might be hope of her learning some melee things.

>>33118502
>[]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower
Might as well make use of our AI.

>>33118551
We need patriotic names for all of our attacks

pess the attack full speed ahead

>>33118502
>[x]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

>>33118502
>[x]Press the attack full speed ahead.

Don't play to her strengths

>>33118502
>[]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

>>33118502
>[]Press the attack full speed ahead.
Our strength is our flexibility, it allows us to target the enemy's weaknesses. Blue Tears is a sniping IS, so we should get right up in it's face and punch it to death.
This also means our biggest challenge may well be Char in the Rafale Revive Custom II, seeing how it's an all-rounder.

>>33118502
[x]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

>>33118697
>Our strength is our flexibility,
not anymore

>>33118608
As long as we threaten to "Liberate the shit out of you" at some point, I think we'll be on the right track

>>33118502
See >>33118470. It's great that you're writing. Truly it is.

But why do it so badly when formatting for basic readability is so goddamned easy?

>>33118697
If that was the case, then why did Ichika (melee only) lose to her?

>>33118704
What the QM said was just a very quick thing, not the full picture.

>>33118502
[x]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

>>33118720
Because he couldn't handle her tig ol' bitties.

>>33118502
>[x]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

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[]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

Knowing that American firepower is second to none. Cecilia has the same idea but her moves are so obvious. Maneuvering to her right while deploying Fragarch, you fire just to spoil her aim. She misses but so do you, just not as much

<How would you like me to support you.>

[]Offensive. Focus on firing solutions for much higher accuracy.
[]Defensive. Focus on enemy movements and attack patterns so you can avoid Cecilia's attacks.

>>33118502
>[]Sniping duel, nothing beats American firepower

>>33118792
>[]Defensive. Focus on enemy movements and attack patterns so you can avoid Cecilia's attacks.
Maeve's got little in the way of shielding, so we have to not get hit.

>>33118792
>[]Defensive. Focus on enemy movements and attack patterns so you can avoid Cecilia's attacks.

Can't lose if we don't get hit.

>>33118792
>[x]Offensive. Focus on firing solutions for much higher accuracy.

>>33118792
>[x]Defensive. Focus on enemy movements and attack patterns so you can avoid Cecilia's attacks.

If we avoid her attacks, she'll be left open to counter attacks.

>>33118792
>[]Offensive. Focus on firing solutions for much higher accuracy.

>>33118720
>why did Ichika (melee only) lose to her?
His IS was going on default settings for most of the match and his sword burns through his own shield energy and he was unaware of that.

>>33118792
>[]Defensive. Focus on enemy movements and attack patterns so you can avoid Cecilia's attacks.

>>33118807
>>33118817
>>33118828
Also, it'll help us when she pulls out her bits. We need to make some crack about how she should have told us she was a Newtype.

>>33118792
>[x]Offensive. Focus on firing solutions for much higher accuracy.

>>33118792
>[]Defensive. Focus on enemy movements and attack patterns so you can avoid Cecilia's attacks.

>>33118792
[x]Offensive. Focus on firing solutions for much higher accuracy.

>>33118842
Plus he's an idiot, and wasn't a very good pilot yet.

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Rolled 7

>>33118792
[]Defensive. Focus on enemy movements and attack patterns so you can avoid Cecilia's attacks.

Fuck it lets do defense

>>33118853
This

defensive. focus on enemy movements and attack patterns so you can avoid cecilia's attacks

>>33118982
To the bits, the Newtype joke, or both?

>>33118792
>[]Offensive. Focus on firing solutions for much higher accuracy.

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[]Defensive. Focus on enemy movements and attack patterns so you can avoid Cecilia's attacks.

“Focus on Cecilia's firing patterns and how she moves. Best not to get hit.” you say as you dodge her laser fire.

<Understood. Displaying projected cones of fire on the Augmented Reality HUD.>

As soon as Reinforce says that you can see a ghostly cone line up with Cecilia's laser rifle. Using this you weave in and out of her fire being able to return fire with near impunity.

“Tch. Maybe you are better than I thought.” you hear Cecilia say over the intercom.

A bit worried you look over to your shield display. Only 85% remaining but she should be worse off than you are. Thinking over on if you should change strategy you notice that the cones of fire starting to increase.

“Hmm focusing too much on dancing to my Blue Tears? I think I should increase the tempo.” Cecilia says with a haughty tone.

<Enemy drones detected. Recommend changing to Gram.>

Time to change tactics now
[]Switch to Gram for more rapid fire power.
[]Ignore the bits and focus on Cecilia with Fragarch.
[]Screw it get close and personal. Melee time.

>>33118998
yes

>>33119195
>[x]Switch to Gram for more rapid fire power.

sounds like a good reccomendation to me.

>>33119195
>[X]Screw it get close and personal. Melee time.
She won't risk using the bits when we're in close to her.

>>33119195
>[]Ignore the bits and focus on Cecilia with Fragarch.

>>33119195
>[]Switch to Gram for more rapid fire power.

>>33119195
>[]Switch to Gram for more rapid fire power.

screw it get close and personal. melee time.

>>33119195
>[x]Switch to Gram for more rapid fire power.
Brrt?

>>33119195
>[x]Screw it get close and personal. Melee time.
Gram is a general purpose rifle, so we'll be gimped against a sniper duel if it's used to take care of the bits.
I'd bank on the Caladbolg just to end this in a quick surprise attack.

>>33119195
>[]Screw it get close and personal. Melee time.

>>33119212
So if we're deciding that we're a Gundam fan, which series is our favorite?

>>33119495
Victory. Because we're nihilistic.

>>33119495
X. Because it doesn't get enough love.

>>33119495
08th MS Team.
Because actual soldiers and shit.

>>33119495
G Gundam because Chibodee is 100% AMERICA

>>33119495
08th MS Team

>>33119495
>character established as being supper murrican
>keep trying to turn him weeaboo

stop

>>33119541
I can get behind this

>>33119567
liking anime isn't the same as weeboo, dipshit.

>>33119547
>G Gundam
>Domon blew up the statue of liberty

Nope. Probably made by terrorist.
.

>>33119195
>[x]Switch to Gram for more rapid fire power.

08th MS Team

>>33119567
Dude, it's as simple as saying "we saw Wing on Toonami when we were a kid and decided to check out the rest.", and it would help exxplain why we decided to go all Amuro on the terrorists.
>>33119547
He's like giant robot Captain America. Loyal to nothing. Except for The Dream.
>>33119602
Domon's a dick. Like, being a dick is a defining character trait, and learning not to be one is a huge part of his character arc.

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[]Switch to Gram for more rapid fire power

While Fragarch is good it's still a bit unwieldy. Sure you can dodge Cecilia's lasers most of the time but each hit is problematic You opt to go more mobile and switch to Gram. This lets you flit in between the laser fire much with much more grace as your center of gravity is no longer thrown off by Fragarch, even if you are closer to Cecilia's position. This increase in mobility lets you start pulling off some of those crazy maneuvers you came up with. Like theone where you change your internal gravity field to purposely change your orientation to make hits into near misses. You follow that up by returning fire parallel to the laser resulting in all four of the bits being destroyed as well as several solid hits on Cecilia's shield.

“Cecilia even if your soul isn't weighted down by gravity, it's still hurt by tungsten sabots.” you retort in between your fire.

“Let's see you dodge this.” you hear from Cecilia, now with desperation in her voice. That would have been a hollow threat if it wasn't for several missile being fired from her hip IS pylons.

Now should you focus on the intercepting the missiles or ignoring them and getting close. Shields are only down to 80% remaining so you should be fine, you think.

[]Missile interception
[]Get close and stay close

>>33119748
>[]Missile interception

We can finish her after

>>33119748
>[x]Missile interception

>>33119748
>[]Missile interception
Shouldn't take the risk.

>>33119748
>>[]Get close and stay close

>>33119748
>[X]Get close and stay close
She's going to shoot us while we're occupied.

>>33119748
>[x]Missile interception

If we try rushing we'll likely make ourselves open.

>>33119817
And this is different from when she fired bits at us how?

>>33119772
This. Sounds like she's running out of tricks; secure our advantage before pressing the attack again.

>>33119748
>[x]Get close and stay close

>>33119748
>[]Missile interception
Dakka is being laid down already anyway.

>>33119748
>[X]Missile interception

get close and stay close

>>33119748
>Missile Interception

Wait for a break in the fire and get up close

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[]Missile interception

Not wanting to take any risks, you opt for missile interception. Cecilia is still firing but it is become more erratic. That is not a good sign. Missile are easy enough to dodge on the first pass and Gram takes out them out in one hit. But the problem is that the missiles continue to track after misses and Cecilia's laser fire is starting to be harder to dodge resulting in more near misses. Eventually you take out all the missiles while only being hit by the shrapnel of the close detonations of the missiles that you intercepted too close to yourself.

“What how! How did you dodge all that with barely a scratch. How?” Cecilia is in utter shock. “I am the Candidate Rep for Britian. I am an elite.”

[]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering
[]You lack experience.

>>33120044
And I'm an American. Who's about to liberate the shit out of you.

>>33120044
>[x]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering

The other sounds very insulting, coming from someone with less experience. No point in rubbing it in.

>>33120044
>[]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering
Her experience or lack thereof isn't the reason & there's no reason to lie to the girl.

Love for Americ or you lock exerice

>>33120069
this

>>33120044
>[]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering

>>33120044
>America.

>>33120044
>[]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering
[]You lack experience

Both

>>33120044
"Back to back World War champs, babe. What else did you expect?"
>[x]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering

>>33120044
>[]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering

Do we actually have more combat experience than her?

>>33120044
>[X]You lack experience.

>>33120044
I thought Brits would be used to losing by now.

>>33120044
>Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering.
It's a calculating mind, not experience. We prepared for this, and so we won.

>>33120136
Well, we have less piloting experience and training, but more experience in actual fights where one's life is on the line, thanks to that bloody terrorist attack.

>>33120136
Yes. We fought off terrorists before.

>>33120162
Once compared to how much training/etc she had?

>>33120184
There's a reason you don't get veterans from training.

>>33120144
After the sportsmanlike opener, I feel like public trash talk could hurt our image. A little arrogance, like >>33120134, sounds good, though. Might as well showboat for potential sponsors.

>>33120196
Dunno there's a difference between playful back and forth and just kicking her while she's down.

>>33120044
>[x]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering

>>33120044
[]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering
"Hail to the king, baby!"

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[]Hard to beat superior firepower and maneuvering

“Cecilia, you played your strengths wrong. Americans as a whole focuses on overwhelming firepower and speed. You should have tried something different to counter that.” you announce over the comms.

“I suppose you are right. But how can you hit something that always dodges you fire.” she ask with obvious fatigue in her voice.

“Easy, you trap the target or you out think him. He cannot dodge your attacks if he cannot move.” you respond. “But this over now.”

[]Ask for her surrender
[]Big finisher, used a expanded Fragarch to finish her.
[]Get in close and use Caladbolg finally.

>>33120268
>[]Ask for her surrender
It would be fitting

>>33120268
>[]Ask for her surrender

>>33120268
>[]Ask for her surrender
Failing that...
>[]Get in close and use Caladbolg finally.

>>33120268
>[]Ask for her surrender

>>33120268
Fragarch.

>>33120268
>[x]Ask for her surrender

>>33120268
>[x]Ask for her surrender

>>33120280
>>33120281
>>33120285
>>33120289
>passing up a chance to cause a giant explosion
Maybe I'm on the wrong board...

ask for her surrender

>>33120268
[x]Ask for her surrender

>>33120321
Sure seems like it.

>>33120321
>showing off capabilities that would be better off as a surprise
Maybe you are.

>>33120321
last time we did something like that in one of the quest boards we did it a little to well and did a little too much overkill.

>>33120356
wut

we started off with the fragarch

>>33120372
Could've sworn it had folded/collapsed, normal, and expanded fire modes. Or did I read that wrong before?

>>33120417
My understanding was collapsed mode was storage, expanded was when you were firing it

>>33120426
Don't have access to my images so use your imagination.
>shruggingcatgirl.jpeg

>>33120360
>>33120356
Fair enough. Changing to
>Ask for her surrender

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[]Ask for her surrender

“Cecilia surrender and let us end this duel.” you ask her.

“No, I cannot accept that. Not only will my pride not accept that but I also cannot accept that offer, thank you though. But you are right about one thing. When faced with superior firepower once must become unconventional.” she responds while beginning her charge at you. But instead of her trying to hit you with her laser fire she purposely misses you. Intent on restricting your movement. Getting closer she fires missiles again.

<Melee combat warning>

Having to intercept the missiles means she is able to get in closer than what you are use to. And she does trying her hardest to hit with a little blue knife. She is able to get a couple of decent hits since you have to use Gram to give you enough time to deploy Caladbolg left handed. And with an inelegant stroke the fight is over as Blue Tear's shields hit zero. The match bell rings but is downed out by the cheers and screams of the crowd. Crap you forgot about that.

>>33120426
We can fire from collapsed mode, but it's less effective.
Can't we just finish her with the general purpose rifle? Asking her surrender feels like offering her a free shot.

And that's it. Should be the same time next week if I can improve my writing situation.

>>33120514
Until next week. Take care.

>>33120514
Thanks for running & see you next week.

>>33120487
>>33120514
Right on, thanks for running!

>>33120514
Thanks for running mind getting a twitter?

A good one!

don't forget to archive!

>>33120633
Not a fan of Twitter honestly but since I have lots of free time, I should be consistent.

>>33120711
Is nice to be able to check twitter and click link to make thread instead of randomly f5'ing TG until the thread shows.

>>33120822
>f5'ing TG
Can't use the catalog mate?

>>33120842
catalog doesn't auto refresh, so you f5 anyway

> infinite stratos
> US MC
What.

>>33123101
>Houki not obviously a shit

OMG IT'S NOT FOLLOWING THE BOOKS AT ALL