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    478 KB Commander Quest CXXXIII Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/13/11(Tue)20:54 No.16286941  
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    You pause to consider Daeseus words. Wolf and him had nearly been discovered while traveling the Uurlanthi countryside and spreading dissent and chaos, through no fault of their own. In order to save Wulfs life, Daeseu had left the impression that he was in fact an agent of some unknown party using Wulfs status to tear the noble house that was hosting the boy apart. Wulf is still alive and presumably well with a merchants daughter trying to use the chaos in many of the major cities to boost herself to a noble standing, much as Wulfs character for the purposes of infiltrating Uurlanth is. "Do you have any more questions about Wulfs doings in Uurlanth, or would you like me to move on to what I have discovered about your foes here in Deganr, Commander?
    >> Generic 09/13/11(Tue)21:05 No.16287054
    No extra questions here
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/13/11(Tue)21:07 No.16287074
    let's move on, then, shall we?
    >> Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)21:07 No.16287076
    This Post Intentionally Left Blank.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/13/11(Tue)21:10 No.16287094
    >>16286941
    One last question: Was Wulf planning on moving toward the Ironcoast lords, or anywhere in our projected combat theater? We may be able to stage an extraction if so.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/13/11(Tue)21:21 No.16287189
    You nod "No, aside from whether you know where the boy will be headed next, I have no more questions about what occurred in Uurlanth. You may move on."

    Daesue pauses to think before he replies "I know that Wulf would likely be called to TruthsHaven due to his connection to an attempt on a noble house, but that would have been seen to some time ago. It is safe to assume that he is attempting to make his way home again by now. As to my network, it has been set up, and is working healthily. I currently am attempting to loacate any members of the cult we have been dealing with, as well as the McClanson/Reshkai criminal organiazation. Some small amounts of progress have been made with both endeavors. Which would you like to hear first?"
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/13/11(Tue)21:26 No.16287230
    >>16287189
    "Let's start with the Forge of New Divinity. What have you been able to find?"

    We might want to have Daeseu work with our ex-Imperial internal security agents for ferreting out cultists and evidence against the 3rd Praetorian.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/13/11(Tue)21:27 No.16287240
    >>16287189
    "The cult is notoriously hard to find leads on, so start with McClanson and Reshkai."

    When he's done talking, add in "I had a paranoid thought, but it may be worth looking into. Do you think there is any possibility the Third Praetorian could be working with those two?"
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/13/11(Tue)21:37 No.16287341
    >>16287230
    >>16287240
    >tiebreaker please?
    >> Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)21:38 No.16287360
    >>16287341
    What does it matter? We're getting both reports. Waiting for input at all was pretty much unnecessary before writing in this case.

    The cult first, if you insist.
    >> Taffer 09/13/11(Tue)21:39 No.16287363
    >>16287189
    Cult first, its more important, I think.

    Also,we should mention that we have two of Lady Hernanda's assassin Shadowguard in our custody to Daseau. He's from the region and could give us some information on how they operate.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/13/11(Tue)21:49 No.16287477
    You shrug "The Forge of New Divinity is incredibly hard to find any information on, so why dont you start with them." you reply, wishing you had some water to drink at the table.

    Daeseu smirks "It may not be much right now, but I believe that I have three seperate members of three seperate 'chaos' cells, as I have dubbed them loacated. I am currently setting my agents to discover the other members of the cells."

    "chaos cells?" you ask, confused.

    Daeseu shrugs "The name seemed apt, as their purpose, as far as I can tell, is to sow chaos and dissent across the nation. There may not be much information to glean from them, but anything to couter their efforts is worth doing, I believe."

    YOu nod "and our fallen noble friend and his criminal accomplice?"

    Daeseu chuckles "Fled to the undercity of Flumenos, abandoning the bulk of the Reshkai family to face justice. Luckily for them, they were simply beggared, not exiled."

    A new voice resounds across the nearly dark dining hall "There is an undercity in Flumenos?"

    Chuckling Daeseu shoots back "The barracks by the docks arent corrupt and crime-ridden Aurelius."

    "But that is in the deepest part of the city. If anything it is the gold and crimson heart of the black, decrepit, amoral city." Aurelius replies, clearly a bit drunk, and quite happy.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/13/11(Tue)21:54 No.16287536
    >>16287477
    I'm beginning to understand why Lamynus wanted a pair of churches in Flumenos.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/13/11(Tue)21:56 No.16287554
    >>16287477
    Ugh. Flumenos. And we need to have heavy dealings with that city, to erect that temple for Lamynus. Well, maybe we can use her temple as a base of operations, as seedy as it would be.

    Has Daeseu come across any links between the cult and the Praetor of the Imperial Excolo?
    >> 風林火山 09/13/11(Tue)21:57 No.16287575
    >>16287536

    no shit.

    >>16287477

    "Was there anything else of note you have discovered?"

    Also we need to find him a good set of undershirt mail. Tell him and get an idea of his needs for it.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/13/11(Tue)22:17 No.16287752
    You groan "Not only will I be going to the bastards new home city, but I will have business to do there as well. Have you learned anything else of that particular pair, or of note?"

    Daeseu shrugs "They did a good job of hiding their tracks. My network could possibly expand if you wanted me to begin operating in Flumenos as well."

    Aurelius laughs "You wouldnt even have to be stealthy about it. Flumenos is one of the only cities wehre killings and theft goes almost unchecked by the Empire."

    "Unless you forget to pay off the Guards that find out, the local Excolo, and whatever other political figures decide you owe them dilver." Daeseu retorts smoothly.

    You sigh "Aurelius, while your up, bring me some water." you turn to face the elf across from you "Speaking of the Excolo, have you connected any of the Forge agents to the Praetor Internus?"

    Daesue nods "Indeed I have. Two of my leads are low level scribes in her offices. I am hoping that they will lead me further into her agency, but with their taste in whores I do not know how long they will last."

    You cock an eyebrow as Aurelius hands you a cup of water before stumbling back towards his room with two more "How do you know, and what does that matter?"

    The elf laughs "My informants on them were whores I pay to pay attention to who plows them, at some rather cheap brothels I must admit. Now, the expansion of your network Justinian, do you wish for it?"
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/13/11(Tue)22:22 No.16287805
    >>16287752
    "It will take time, but it's worth doing. How much palm grease will you need to get things moving?"
    >> 風林火山 09/13/11(Tue)22:22 No.16287812
    >>16287752

    "As long as the risk of infiltration is not too great. You have leave to expand as long as it does not put the network at risk.

    Why would your informants not last long? Seems to me they're probably able to report on them indefinitely."
    >> Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)22:28 No.16287855
    >>16287752
    "Of course. Can't fight an enemy I can't find, and I can ill afford to be blindsided and outmaneuvered in these matters. While you're at it, sooner or later I'll need to start tracking down people with arcane talents who haven't reported them- we need to recruit all we can, particularly mystics. I know chasing down rumors is kind of hellish, but if you can keep an eye out and ensure that my recruiters get accurate information about where to find people, I would appreciate it. And while we can ill afford to focus arcane talent away from the legions at the moment, sooner or later I'll want to supplement my networks with that as well- so start thinking about what would be useful. I should be able to make arrangements once the war dies down."
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/13/11(Tue)22:28 No.16287858
    >>16287812
    >>16287805
    Pretty much agreed to let him expand our network.
    I'm curious: do their tastes in whores tend toward the exotic, or what?
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/13/11(Tue)22:29 No.16287874
    Just want to post this incase anyone else want to go for it:
    <TRO> So, I had an idea about Kyria's steam crossbows.
    <TRO> Once she gets down the right runic phrases, have the runes be on modular plates, so that they could be switched out for varying effects based on the expected circumstances.
    <TRO> Like have one that makes a deafening boom where the bolt strikes, ones that freeze shit, or just the standard mage-killer ammo.
    >> Generic 09/13/11(Tue)22:29 No.16287879
    >>16287752
    "I believe it will be needed regardless of my wishes."

    ... I wonder if converting one of twins might aid in this little shadow war that is brewing...

    "Would one of Lady [Hernanda?]'s shadow guard be able to assist you in these works, if they could be turned to our side?"

    also, get his opinion on where those twins' skills might be on a scale of 1-Daeseu.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/13/11(Tue)22:42 No.16287998
    You nod "Feel free to expand the network as needed. How much gold would be needed to seed the new cities network?"

    Daeseu ponders for a while before replying "500 Dragoons would be more than plenty to that end."

    You nod "Very good. Now, I recently acquired a pair of assassins from Alicia Henrandas Shadow Guard. Provided they can be turned, do you think they would be of use?"

    Daeseu perks up "Most certainly. though, unless they have realized that none leave a Hernandas ShadowGuard yet, and provided they are not imbeciles, they will be quite unturnable. Failing thier conversion, one or two of the retired Excolo agents that have been coming to Janos would be just as good for the networks expansion. I will need to re-train them to a certain extent of course, but there are more than a few disgruntled young agents in your pool that I could pluck for my own use. With your permission of course."
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/13/11(Tue)22:47 No.16288040
    >>16287998
    "Hmm. They seemed aware of what happens to those who try to leave the ShadowGuard.
    "Choose from amongst the Excolo agents, then. Probably better, too, as they won't stick out of as much, being native Degnarians."
    >> 風林火山 09/13/11(Tue)22:50 No.16288068
    >>16287998

    "Take a 1000. It is good to have some more funds on the side should you need them urgently.

    Do as you see best, Daeseu. I intend to set up a school for war orphans. Part of their intake will no doubt include young street urchins.

    While this will prepare the children for gainful employment and service with Dengar, it is also a good place to eventually source for new agents for your network."
    >> Brick 09/13/11(Tue)22:51 No.16288083
    >>16287998
    Turning the twins would take a while most likely.

    We could come up to their cell one day after we visit the archives and inquire (after searching for more info on her) why so few of her assassins leave her service and retire. She does have a habit of killing those who leave her service right?

    We should use the Excolo agents for now
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/13/11(Tue)22:51 No.16288086
    >>16288068
    good with both of these.
    >> Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)23:00 No.16288160
    >>16287998
    Bring up the matter of scouting for arcane people as mentioned in >>16287855. None of our other assets are likely to get as widespread an information input as Daeseu is, and as someone shooting for Seventh every arcane talent that we can seize and put under our control is a great thing. More to the point, every arcane talent that remains outside our control is a potential recruit for someone interested in building a rival power base and challenging our authority. We can't afford to let any arcanists fly under the radar if we don't have to.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/13/11(Tue)23:03 No.16288196
    Nodding slowly you reply "1000 dragoons will be your purse then. And select your seed agents from our inbound former Excolo agents. I fear that it will take me quite a while to turn our Uurlanthi assassins."

    Daeseu smiles "Thank you, commander, I will see tot he expansion of your network by the end of the week."

    You grin ever so slightly "So long as you dont get yourself injured again. You should get your measurements to a smith. I acquired enough mithia on my last campaign to buy you a mail undershirt."

    Daeseu returns your smile "I had not expected to be so... rewarded for failing to be a continuing help to Wulf... though with what I taught him before and during his mission he is more than capable now. Did you have any other business with me, commander?" he asks, as he finishes the water that had been sitting on the table in front of him.
    >> Generic 09/13/11(Tue)23:07 No.16288230
    >>16288196

    "failing? Your actions protected Wulf, my friend. I'd call your mission a success, Daeseu."
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/13/11(Tue)23:07 No.16288235
    >>16288196
    "I probably don't have to tell you this, but if you find any budding elementalists, send them to my Academy. 1 more in my school is one less out in the wild and potentially used by my enemies. If you should come across any detection arcana, consider it an operational expense and acquire it; I will have Janos release additional funds if you require them."

    I think that's it for now.
    >> Brick 09/13/11(Tue)23:13 No.16288284
    >>16288230
    >>16288235
    These are good.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/13/11(Tue)23:28 No.16288401
    You chuckle, rising as you finish your water "Aside from reminding you that any arcanists you come across are to be sent to my academy if at all possible, no."

    Daeseu rises "Very well then commander, thank you again for your excessive generosity."

    You reach out to clasp the elf on his shoulder "Nonsense, you kept Wulf safe, risking your own life for his. I would a be a tyrant and unfit for command if I did not reward such service and devotion to ones mission and comrades." At that the two of you part ways, both presumably headed to your rooms to sleep. For you, sliding into the oversize bed without waking anyone is considerably easier than the oversize cot, but it is still a small wonder that you managed to accomplish the feat. A content smirk on your lips, you slip into sleep.

    >co, anything you want to work on immediately, or do you want to skip ahead until something of note happens?
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/13/11(Tue)23:29 No.16288419
    Get Kyria's thoughts on MODULAR CROSSBOWS OF FUCK YOU when she's next available.
    >> Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)23:32 No.16288436
    >>16288401
    We need to talk to Bellatrix and Lena about putting together a formalized training program for an arcanist bodyguard specialist position, and with Kyria about what kind of runic options we have for outfitting such people. We talked about that but didn't really do anything to make it happen other than say "they'll need bodyguards".

    Similarly, I'm not sure what we've done if anything as far as developing our mage-hunter units. Check up on that.
    >> Laurentius 09/13/11(Tue)23:38 No.16288498
    >>16288436
    second
    >> Brick 09/13/11(Tue)23:43 No.16288529
    >>16288436
    thirded

    We should also think about creating a formal training program for irregular/guerrilla units like Blackbirds unit. It would help insure a fresh supply of soldiers to Blackbirds unit and would make it easier to train our colleagues forces if they request training.
    >> Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)23:49 No.16288583
    >>16288529
    True. It would also be worthwhile to consider how we might integrate arcanists into our irregulars- I bet Blackbird could do terrifying things with a few competent arcanists, and would have tons of genius sadistic ideas for how to apply their powers. But taking them out of standard training at this point would probably be inappropriate... perhaps make that an alternate career path after they've gone through at least one operation normally and we know they won't blow themselves up.
    >> Brick 09/13/11(Tue)23:53 No.16288614
    >>16288583
    Making it specialist training after basic arcanist/elementalist training sounds logical.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/13/11(Tue)23:54 No.16288621
    >>16288583
    Sounds good.

    Also, we should check in with the werebeast penal unit, see if any of them are ready to be released.
    Which leads into coming up with a screening process to identify those infected with the disease.
    The Were-minotaurs are now active, and the other were-beasts will be cropping up again soon. Best to be prepared.
    >> Laurentius 09/13/11(Tue)23:55 No.16288625
    >>16288614
    sounds good
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)00:02 No.16288676
    The next morning starts slowly, as is common for the days not on the front. you spend the first portion of the day loitering about the barracks, giving your spear, and armor a much more through cleaning and oiling than you have time for in the field. you consider polishing your shield, but it has been nearly melted too many times, almost cleaved in twain one time too many, perhaps even used to bash in one too many heads, so you let the faithful sheet of steel rest against a wall while you care for the rest of your gear. By midday you are at your academy as the classes break for a midday meal. you find Lena eating with Catalina and Sansa, Bellatrix off on her own drilling with the former excolo guards, and Kyria eating with Laelith. You assemble all of them to begin another brief meeting. "Ladies, there are several projects that I feel I need to discuss with you. Namely, a program for bodyguards for the mages in training, and the formation of an arcanist hunting unit."

    the girls look at each other for a bit, before Bellatrix responds "If you can provide me with recruits I may be able to train more guards, but my stance and style will not be easy to learn."

    Sansa chuckles "Imagine the difficulty that others would have learning to fight like me then. I am glad that the task will not fall to me."

    Bellatrix shakes her head "Suicidal abandon and luck cannot be taught. And I shudder to think of the results of that being attempted."

    It is clearly a joke, but Kyria rises to defend Sansa "The highest levels of skill look like naught but luck and madness to the less skilled." Bellatrix shoots the dwarf a sour face as Kyria smirks and continues "I have the phrases for repeaters, steambows, and shields, but they will need some tweaking for melee weapons and armor. If you know what sort of armor you would like to use for said units I could begin work today... though most forms of mail would be... prohibitively time-consuming for most runewrights."
    >cont'd
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)00:03 No.16288689
    Lena shrugs "It would be a small matter to work firing around a bodyguard into my classes training regimen at this point. though, for the enhancement focused mages, more guards may be prudent, as they would serve poorly as field artillery."

    Bellatrix nods "and it would be far easier to train the guards for such mages, as they will be able to focus more on aggression than defense. Defending indeterminately can be... difficult."
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)00:11 No.16288782
    What do you think guys? Lorica or breastplate and helm for the bodyguards?

    Cause I'm thinking breastplate. Decent protection while keeping mobility.

    "Kyria, since the steam-powered crossbows' ammunition uses runes of transferrence to work, do you think it would be at all possible to make modular parts for the crossbows to give them different effects from battle to battle?
    >> Taffer 09/14/11(Wed)00:11 No.16288783
    >>16288676
    >>16288689
    Would they prefer legionaires with a bit of experience or new recruits for the body guard position?
    >> Generic 09/14/11(Wed)00:15 No.16288828
    did we ever get Kyria working on getting those "fire" runes turned into incendiary grenade/bombs? or putting them onto our valk's iron rain arrows?
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)00:18 No.16288860
    >>16288828
    the melty ones were her idea, so I'm assuming yes.
    >> Starshadow 09/14/11(Wed)00:20 No.16288870
    >>16288782
    Head and chest are the most important places to protect. Legs and arms a close second. It sounds like mobility will be more of a benefit for that role.
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)00:20 No.16288871
    >>16288676
    >>16288689

    I assume she would have to inscribe the runic phrases on EVERY scale in scale mail? In that case it would be logical to have full plate with breastplate be the standard for the bodyguards.

    >>16288828
    I believe she is working on it, but we should check on the progress for good measure.
    >> Anonymous 09/14/11(Wed)00:20 No.16288873
    >>16288689
    Bodyguarding isn't just a matter of combat training, although that's important. We need basically all our mages to have guards full-time whenever they're on campaign, even when there's no battle on- because mages will be prime assassination targets. They'll need training/protection against mystics if possible, too; mystic assassins are going to be the stuff of nightmares. And ideally bodyguards will also receive basic education in what the various types of arcanists can do so that they can provide their mage with relevant tactical advice and accurately identify threats.

    Equipment-wise, they need at minimum shields that can block basic magic, or they'll die way too easy. Armor for the same would be a good next thing if we can get enough of it made, and mage-killer weapons wouldn't be out of line either.

    >>16288782
    Breastplates are good, but if they can only protect the torso from a magical blast then they're not going to be overly helpful- we don't need hunters or bodyguards getting their legs and arms charred off. Full-body protection from magical threats is needed, since so many magical attacks are wide-area.

    >>16288783
    Got to mix it up. Experience is valuable, but at the same time we need people with fresh minds who will immediately get used to new methods.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)00:21 No.16288885
    >>16288782
    I'm thinking lorica, just for logistical sake.

    Also seconding asking about modular runes.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)00:29 No.16288947
    >>16288873
    I mean, OBVIOUSLY, shields, too, but just talking armor, breastplate and helm.
    >> 風林火山 09/14/11(Wed)00:38 No.16289017
    Whatever happened to the were-people?

    Perhaps we can raid the prisons for prospective people to 'volunteer' themselves as subjects to be changed.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)00:39 No.16289032
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    Shit, you know, maybe we could get the mage-hunters shields like this?
    >> Anonymous 09/14/11(Wed)00:45 No.16289092
    Once we are done with the specifics of the bodyguards we should visit the were-minotaurs and the son of that traitor.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)00:45 No.16289093
    >>16289032
    I don't know...I was actually envisioning the bodyguards' shields as disposable types. The magic-absorption and nullification runes would cause the shields to melt or become unusuable during battle. We know that the runes can only absorb so much arcane energy before burning out. The guards need to consider that as well as defending against mundane threats.

    But then again, big tower shields would help in defending against enemy arrow volleys.
    >> 風林火山 09/14/11(Wed)00:45 No.16289097
    >>16289032

    Hmm, since we've actually seen a mage blast vapourise an entire block, shields which encourage them to stay in one location and take pot shots doesnt seem like a good idea.

    Ideally, I think it should be a small angled shield for them to be fast and agile, yet catch or deflect strikes should they connect.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)00:46 No.16289111
    >>16289097
    So, more SPARTAAA than my shield image?
    >> 風林火山 09/14/11(Wed)00:48 No.16289125
    >>16289111

    Something like that. Angled and layered with antu-magic runes.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)00:51 No.16289149
    You scratch at your chin before replying "What would you ladies say to a breastblate and shield enscribed with magic negating runes, scalewail for the rest, left mundane. The weapons on the bodyguards _could_ be magic-negating but that would not be necessary. Aside from combat training, the guards would need to be able to protect the mages from assassination or abduction off the field, as they will be high priority targets. they could be drawn from both raw recruits, and legionary soldiers, to provide a good mix between existing knowledge and potential until the force is better established."

    Kyria nods "I can do that quite easily."

    smiling Sansa adds "I could handle the bodyguard duty training. fighting an assassin is much different than a soldier, and I have experience with both. As well as experience with handling the boredom when no challenge appears for a long time."

    Lena sighs, and you cuhuckle, before asking "Kyria, do you think it would be possible to set repeaters and steambows to have interchangeable runic phrases inscribed on them? Then mage-hunters would be useful even when no enemy arcanists are present."

    the dwarf nods "I may e able to do that. It might take some time, but it would be doable."

    Still chuckling Sansa adds "The question with the mage-hunters is where to recruit from, who will train them, and how they will be trained to fight."
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)00:57 No.16289187
    >>16289149
    Recruit from Scouts and Rangers (for ranged weapons training), cross-train with Aurelius (accuracy) and Blackbird (camouflage and sneaking), and trained to stay out of the general fighting and sneak around the edges of the battlefield in pairs or groups of 4, and take down enemy officers and mages at their discretion. Basically Marine Force Recon snipers.
    >> Laurentius 09/14/11(Wed)00:58 No.16289196
    >>16289187
    second
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)00:58 No.16289201
    >>16289187
    this sounds good to me
    >> Anonymous 09/14/11(Wed)01:00 No.16289224
    We should visit the were-minotaurs and check on their current condition as well our other "guest".
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)01:03 No.16289242
    >>16289149
    Mage hunter captains NEED to have experience in fighting various forms of arcanist as well as possess an amount of offensive elementalism. For the first couple rounds of picking, at least. The vets teach their squads how to deal with shit.
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)01:06 No.16289256
    >>16289242
    It would be easy to pick some useful recruits out of the broken units in the city like we did with the Loukys unit.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)01:07 No.16289270
    >>16289224
    I agree.
    Any ideas on werebeast integration with our maniple?
    We used them on a suicide attack back at Northmont, but that was only because they were death row criminal volunteers. If we get more recruits simply because they're werebeasts, how should we deploy them?
    Specialist combat teams specializing in night operations is the only thing I can think of, since their were-form is only activated by the moon.

    Pax, could you refresh my memory: after the initial awakening of an Infected's were-form, will they turn whenever there's a full moon, or can they control their transformation so they can do it at will? I remember one of the survivors of our were-beasts transformed into a halfway shape even though it wasn't night due to him meditating and trying to control his shape.
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)01:15 No.16289328
    >>16289270
    Well, it we want to create more of them from those that are to be executed for their crimes we should have Autronius screen them first. There must be a great many that would prefer this to death and are mentally stable. We should also have Autronius scan the ones we currently have.

    As to how to deploy them we could attach some of them to Blackbirds unit or group them into independent guerrilla squads.
    >> Anonymous 09/14/11(Wed)01:17 No.16289359
    >>16289270
    I see them as a breaking unit. They go in to break the enemy's formation, moral and body.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)01:20 No.16289387
    >>16289328
    We got away with doing it to prisoners slated to be executed in Northmont, but I don't know if we can here in the capital. I mean, yeah, it's their choice, but we might get dinged on it like we did with those volunteers way back after our first campaign. We're on everyone's political radars now, so we have to keep that in mind.
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)01:21 No.16289400
    >>16289387
    a good point
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)01:23 No.16289414
    >>16289359
    An assault group to break enemy formations?
    Could work with the were-minotaurs and the werewolves, but I don't know about the were-spiders.
    Which reminds me, we need to get some scholars on-staff to begin looking through old records on what kinds of were-beasts are going to start cropping up, how to detect them, and when they activate (we know that the were-minotaurs activate when exposed to the Taurus Moon).
    >> Anonymous 09/14/11(Wed)01:30 No.16289463
    >>16289414
    We might as well hire a group of full time scholars and and copiers. In fact lets do that we will need our own library on our new fort.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)01:34 No.16289489
    >>16289463
    We should probably make a sealed off part of said library only accessable with earth elementalism for the more sensitive materials. Last thing I want is some newbie stumbling into the necromancy tomes.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)01:39 No.16289516
    >>16289463
    Come to think of it...we should probably begin making copies of all of the training tomes we've found thus far; as more and more magic returns and it becomes impossible to hide, copies of training manuals will become a hot commodity and a good source of income.
    >> Maximus 09/14/11(Wed)01:40 No.16289520
    >>16289187
    I can agree with this for the most part but I think they should get some melee training and if I remember correctly, those units aren't super great in melee. There are times where cutting their way through the enemy might be required to reach the enemy mages. Either they're going to have to do it solo or tag along with another unit to punch through I guess.
    >> Maximus 09/14/11(Wed)01:41 No.16289534
    >>16289516
    I kind of dislike this idea simply because I thought the point of the academy was to make that part of our powerbase in the sense that Justinian would be the guy to go to for elementalists. Gives us more political pull if the only REAL training systems that exist are under our control and known by us mostly.
    >> GoldPanda 09/14/11(Wed)01:41 No.16289535
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    Still catching up with thread. Just wanted to put up my ideas again:

    1. Field medicae corp: Take legion rejects, poor plebs, older orphans, anyone else on the fringe of society that the Degnar Empire considers expendable, and put them to work rescuing wounded soldiers on the battlefield.

    Young widows might also want to sign up to get themselves another husband.

    Pros: decreases force attrition / casualties
    increases morale
    first aid / triage / tourniquets is easy to teach
    more soldiers go home to sire more children
    gives desperately poor people jobs
    built-in on-site dating service

    Cons: probably costs money

    2. Parachutes

    Pros: saves our elite air cavalry riders from certain death
    increases morale
    paratroopers

    Cons: takes research effort
    probably costs money
    >> 風林火山 09/14/11(Wed)01:43 No.16289543
    >>16289535

    >Medic

    Might not actually. What we need to do is to pitch it to the first. If he likes it enough, the state will fund it.

    Mil. contracts, man.

    >Parachutes

    I wonder about those cows... Degrain must be up to something.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)01:46 No.16289562
    You shrug "Recruit them from scouts and rangers, have Aurelius train them fro accuracy and Blackbird for infiltration and stealth. They will operate by sneaking about the edges of the battlefield and striking at enemy arcanists."

    Catalina tilts her head "What if the battle is too large for that too work?"

    Everyone turns to look at he quiet girl, who shrinks back as if struck, before Laelith calmly replies "Logic states that they would need to be capable of taking the field and charging enemy arcanists."

    Sansa shakes her head "The training styles would be too different. Perhaps armor trained Lacerta and dwarves in full plate armor for the situations where precision targetting would be impossible or an unviable tactic."

    Kyria butts in "Perhaps were-beasts as well? Once they achieve total control of their... curses, they can shift at will, not only with the corresponding moon to the one that awakens them."

    Bellatrix laughs "I am certain that every blacksmith within a hundred miles just screamed out in terror, and does not know why, Kyria."
    >> Maximus 09/14/11(Wed)01:50 No.16289589
    >>16289562
    Hmm. Might be best to train the hunters in two styles like they're suggesting. The stealthy groups and the rip and tear groups. More annoying but it gives the hunters more options to take out targets. They're going to have to be well protected against magic though.
    >> Maximus 09/14/11(Wed)01:53 No.16289606
    >>16289535
    We need an idea on how much money we have left over and how much things might cost that we currently have planned to purchase. Such as temples and other investments like mines and crap before we start funding something like the medic's. If we have the cash, it'd be worthwhile looking in to.

    In terms of the parachutes, I'm fine with that idea but Degrian is busy making the upgrades to the heavy repeaters I believe for our naval combat.

    Also, I think we might want to invest in another personal unit or two. Infantry this time perhaps. Our infantry line always seems stretched to the max with no back up units to support the flanks.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)01:54 No.16289614
    >>16289562
    "Give them a challenge! 'Let's see just how huge I can make this maul'"
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)01:55 No.16289616
    >>16289614
    Gives*
    >> Laurentius 09/14/11(Wed)02:03 No.16289685
    >>16289589
    seconded and then let's go visit the werebulls and the orphan
    >> GoldPanda 09/14/11(Wed)02:03 No.16289689
    >>16289543
    Is that a second?

    All the ideas mentioned so far sounds good to me. Except that we do not have permission to publish/spread most of our tech to the rest of the Legion.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)02:05 No.16289697
    >>16289606
    >>16289589
    Hmm...without the extreme range that modern sniper rifles offer, I can see the point of having a melee contingent with the hunters. The bigger the battlefield, the more spread out the enemy would be, and so the thinner his screening force. But they do have velociprey cavalry that could track down mage hunter units during a battle, and lacertans or dwarves would be needed.

    I just wish we could develop a gun that allows snipers to fire on mages from so far away as to effectively be off of the battlefield and unassailable.

    As for checking our funding, I agree. If we have the money, we should get our own personal field medic corps if we can't convince the Praetor to fund it, and a personal merc infantry unit to go with our Skywings.
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)02:06 No.16289706
    >>16289562
    Melee anti-mage units are a good idea too. They could train under Collin and another mage. Lacerta would be excellent.

    We could also see if there are any exceptional soldiers in the academy battles that we could recruit for the were-beast program. For armor we could just have them dress orversized in chain mail that would fit when they transform.
    >> GoldPanda 09/14/11(Wed)02:06 No.16289711
    >>16289606
    Field medicae corp should be fairly cheap to set up. And maybe we can indeed get the Praetorian Militant to pay the bill.

    As for parachutes, maybe we should just hire a seamstress and get her and our Skywings captain to figure it out themselves. They can experiment with dolls / mannequins before moving on to livestock. We don't need Degrian for this.
    >> GoldPanda 09/14/11(Wed)02:07 No.16289722
    >>16289697
    Maximum effective range on our crossbows/bows are a few hundred yards. That's pretty good.
    >> Maximus 09/14/11(Wed)02:10 No.16289743
    >>16289722
    Accuracy and getting a clear shot it the problem though. Especially if the enemy mages are in the middle of their army and have units in front of them. To be fair, the long range crossbows we had Degrian made should help but we can't rely on sniping unfortunately.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)02:11 No.16289751
    >>16289689
    >Except that we do not have permission to publish/spread most of our tech to the rest of the Legion.
    Actually, we should ask about this.
    With the war possibly entering a critical stage, and the Ironcoast Lords being the last Uurlanthi pro-war holdouts, maybe now we can disseminate some of our other technologies? At the very least, to the other three commanders that we'll be working with on the siege we're being sent to.
    >> GoldPanda 09/14/11(Wed)02:18 No.16289818
    >>16289751
    We can always check with the Praetorian Militant while we're in the city. Sure.

    As I recall our current orders are:
    * Do not give the auto-wagons to anybody. Lending them during missions is fine. I guess this is because we're royally screwed if Uurlanthi raiding forces can copy this technology.

    * Other techs should be kept within the Fists.

    * All runes should use transference runes to prevent copying.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)02:29 No.16289893
    >>16289818
    Well, since the other commanders are now all part of the same fist as us, we can share runesmithing and repeater technology. Since this is a siege, though, I don't know if autowagons will be that useful. Maybe when moving from the port, to where we will take up the siege, but we'd have to outfit everyone with autowagons and I don't know if we have that much engineering capacity.
    Runes, repeater crossbows, steambows, and heavy cycle repeaters might be all we'll need.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)02:38 No.16289958
    You nod, shuddering at the though of a Lacerta in magic-proof platemail as much as the thought of a minotaur simalairly armored. "Very good suggestions, the melee contingent of mage-hunters can be trained for combat by Collin, and armor trained by Uurist if necessary." you look about, and see the classes beginning to reform "Now however, it would seem that most of you have duties for the academy to see to, so I will leave you too them." and at that, you stand from your seat, pushing the remnants of your meal back, and make your way to the interior of the academy. You descend to the secure cells, wehre you quickly notice that none of the cells are locked, and the door that leads into Restans room is open and the chamber unnocupied. Shruging you nock on the door to one of the Were-minotuars before entering and asking "How goes your progress?"

    the dwarf stands from his meditative stance, and, as he does so, shifts into a minotaur "I am the least focused of us." he informs you in his bestial form, before shifting back into his dwarf form and throwing a loose robe abound his body. "Would you like me to collect the others?" he asks, respectfully.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)02:40 No.16289969
    >>16289958
    "Color me impressed. I knew I was right to have faith in you. Go ahead and gather the others. I'd like to make the announcement while you're all present."
    >> GoldPanda 09/14/11(Wed)02:44 No.16289987
    >>16289958
    Yes, please. Ask for volunteers for the mage-hunter unit. Those who don't want such a risky job can be bodyguards, I guess?
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)02:46 No.16290007
    >>16289987
    We could also give some of them the option of teaching other who are infected how to control themselves.

    I am not sure we should have them as bodyguards, as some of them might revert to their criminal tenancies.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)02:53 No.16290062
    >>16290007
    >>16289987
    >>16289969
    We did promise them their freedom if they can control themselves while transformed.
    We can offer them a job, of course, but on our honor if they want to leave, we have to let them.

    Of course, if any one of them ever commits a crime again, it'll be a long walk and a short drop for them.
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)02:58 No.16290091
    >>16290062
    Very true. We should make the offer extra temting.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)03:00 No.16290101
    >>16290091
    something like "I know one or two of you have a taste for blood, so why not join my maniple and get paid to do what you love?"
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)03:01 No.16290114
    You nod "Yes, I have an announcement I would like to make to all of you."

    The dwarf nods and trots off. A few minutes alter, all of the survivors are standing at a rather sloppy attention in a line before you. When you motion for them to be at ease, teh line immediately desintigrates to a somewhat rodered group of killers. "You called for us?" the man who seemed to be entirely to comfortable with killing asks.

    You sigh, and reply "I did. As all of you have control of your powers, you are, free to go if you so choose, as per our agreement. However, I can again offer you employment. Either teaching future were-creatures to controll their curses... or in a unit of arcanist hunters that I am forming. Both positions will pay well, and with both you will be provided with personal quarters at my academy, which will be the headquarters of the Loukys hunting, and arcanist-hunting units once it is moved to its final loacation."

    After several minutes of talking amongst themselves, and thinking quietly, all but the dwarf who had vomited the night after their initial mission as were-minotaurs, volunteer for the mage-hunters. The dwarf opts instead to serve as a teacher at your academy for any additional were-beasts brought in. You inform the men to speak with Esthriya about their housing, and leave them to talk amongst themselves.

    Outside you see the classes continuing as usual. Lena personally tutoring the son of the traitor, Restan, while her class continues to spar and practice competently behind her. Sighing contentedly, you contemplate interrupting the girl for the second day in a row, or whether you should simply go back to the barracks and enjoy this time of rest.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)03:09 No.16290183
    >>16290114
    Actually, as much as rest sounds good, we should get started on that group of scholars and scribes, ones with security clearance to enter the Imperial Archives, and have them research the old methods on detecting were-beasts, and what kind of beasts are going to start appearing.
    Janos can probably handle that, with Laelith assisting if she has time.

    Other than that, perhaps we should try to get an appointment with our Praetorian and put forth the field medicae proposal to him. See if he'll foot the bill for a test unit in our upcoming campaign, or at least, help us with the bill.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)03:09 No.16290184
    >>16290114
    What do you guys say, have a chat with the kid?
    >> 風林火山 09/14/11(Wed)03:12 No.16290207
    >>16290183

    Sounds good.

    >>16290184

    Not sure if it's time for us to show our face again. Might need to give him abit more time.
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)03:13 No.16290218
    >>16290183
    Sounds good to me.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)03:15 No.16290226
    >>16290184
    I think we should give him more time. And we can ask Lena at the end of the day how he's handling things before we talk with him.
    We should find out what his personality is now, before talking with him again.
    >> GoldPanda 09/14/11(Wed)03:30 No.16290320
    >>16290183
    Aye to this. We need general research assistants for when Laelith is on campaign with us.

    Maybe our elementalists in training can do this for extra credit?

    Nay to talking to Restan just yet. Maybe next time we are in DragonsReach. Talk to Lena after the lesson is over to get more intel on the kid.
    >> Laurentius 09/14/11(Wed)03:32 No.16290335
    >>16290226
    this
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)03:33 No.16290345
    Later that night, you find yourself riding home, Laelith on your lap "Laelith, what would you think about some aids for your archive and tome copying and compilation work?" you ask the elf lazily as Spite plods on towards the city.

    She smirks "As much as I enjoy searching the archives with you, the help would be appreciated for when it is just I."

    You nod, as you shift a hand from the elfs waist to block the sun from flowing into your left eye, as the sunset leaves it on the perfect level to make seeing difficult and painful "How much do you think you would need to establish such a group for our maniple?" you ask her.

    She turns to face you "Perhaps 750 dragoons for a team of ten to search and ten to copy, compile and improve upon what we find." is her relaxed response.

    >so, anything else you want to take care of before timeskipping to the next interesting occurrence? (as far as talking to the First, you'll see him at your wedding so that isnt really a necessity.)
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)03:35 No.16290355
    >>16290345
    Sounds good to me. Timeskip HO!
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)03:35 No.16290358
    >>16290345
    That sounds like a reasonable price to me. Lets go for it.
    >> No Gods or Devils, Only Mortals 09/14/11(Wed)03:37 No.16290368
    >>16290345
    Bringing up business at a wedding doesn't seem like good form, though. At least, when we're the groom.
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)03:38 No.16290374
    >>16290368
    We could always send him a letter.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)03:53 No.16290450
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    Still quite relaxed you reply "Then consider it done. You will have the funds on the morrow, if you wish to start your archivist team immediately."

    Laelith smiles, and, leaning back to kiss you replies "Thank you, love... but I seem to have worked up a bit of a sweat today. so the archivist team will cost you a bath as well."

    Chuckling you return the elfs kiss before replying "I believe that that is a price I can pay." before wrapping your loose arm back around her waist, as the sun is no longer in your eyes, and continuing to ride.

    -----CQ-----

    Several days later, Janos calls you to his office. Inside he has the map of potential DragonKeeps set out again, as well as several sheets of parchment. "Justinain, the scouts I sent out to the potential DragonKeeps have returned and updated their estimates on costs for each keep. Once you are finsihed looking over the information gathered, I have a small flight of valkeries rented out, and will be able to train you and two companions to ride out with myself and Kaitlyn to inspect the keeps if you so choose." at that, he slides the four sheets of parchment to you, and patiently waits as you read them.
    >cont'd
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)03:55 No.16290456
    A: Gryphon nests and Aurachnospecs lairs nearby. Most tunenl exits are closely watched by sabercats. very few resources in the area of any note.
    Repair Cost: 70000
    Venture seed: Steeds/beasts:500

    B: Most tunnels serviceable and lead to easily salvageable watchposts, abandoned mines, or other abandoned dragonkeeps. Excellent crop of fish, including several rare species found at that point of the boreodoth river. Possible mountain logging and mining operations made easier through use of the river for transit. Pegasus and Uursan nests and lairs common, fewer Gryphons and Valkeries, but not unheard of in the area.
    Repair cost: 30000
    Venture seed: mines: 14000
    logging: 9000
    steeds/beasts: 750
    Fishery: 5000

    C: Most servicable tunnels dump out into wilderness. most nearby mines still active. High ammounts of road traffic make supply purchase easy. Exellent possible for larger temple to Eago, or an inn or pub. Large population of Tundra Badgers as well as severa species of shrew and mole, both carniverous and rock-eating.
    Repair cost: 45000
    Venture seed: Inn: 2000
    beasts: 250
    mine (invest): 8000-14000

    D: The existing tunnels exit into vilalges, and are very well kept. A popular destination for local youths, and near many aboandoned mines. Most of the local villages are quite poor, and food is difficult to come by. Some forests in the area, as well as a large population of Valkeries and horses.
    Repair cost: 55000
    Venture seed: Inn: 2500
    mines: 14000
    beasts/steeds: 600
    logging: 9500
    >> GoldPanda 09/14/11(Wed)04:02 No.16290485
    >>16290456
    Still voting for C.

    While inspecting, we can build up crude fortifications for the tunnel exits with our earth elementalism.
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)04:05 No.16290498
    >forgott to add to each keep what the revised property purchase would be for each keep
    >a: 20000
    >b: 40000
    >c: 60000
    >d: 50000
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)04:06 No.16290502
    Keep B

    gets my vote
    >> Anonymous 09/14/11(Wed)04:07 No.16290507
    B sounds like we'd be able to do more with the place. Plus I like it's position at the top of the river.
    >> Taffer 09/14/11(Wed)04:09 No.16290513
    >>16290450
    >>16290456
    Ok, with this report, A is out the window and D is probably better as a branch of our hopefully several schools in the future.

    On to the meat of the report, B and C are pretty much what we want. B is better as a stronghold, with better security and an abundant supply of food. Its also cheaper.

    However, C is a better place to place a school due to the reasons I wrote a few threads before. You know something guys, if we were losing the war, I'd go for B, but since we have the advantage, I'm going for C.

    tl;dr: C +1 vote
    >> Laurentius 09/14/11(Wed)04:09 No.16290515
    >>16290502
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)04:11 No.16290520
    B sounds best to me.

    Plenty of money making opportunities. Plenty of excape routes. Pegasus, Uursan, Gryphons and Valkeries nearby sound perfect if we ever want to capture more breeding stock.

    We can always buy the others later if we want.
    >> 風林火山 09/14/11(Wed)04:12 No.16290523
    >>16290456

    A and D are quite out of the running.

    Thing is, do we want a strategic location to control or a out of the way place with CASH and the ability to capture airborne mounts?

    Also:
    A: Few hrs Air travel, less than 1/2 a week on foot

    B: Hard Day's ride on valk, 1 week on foot

    C: 1 day's flight 2-3 more days on foot compared to B

    D: Same as A

    Travelling times to the Capital if i read correctly.
    >> 風林火山 09/14/11(Wed)04:18 No.16290549
    >>16290456

    Voting for C.
    >> Tactical Routine Omicron !oiqMeATbAg 09/14/11(Wed)04:32 No.16290602
    Verry well, with Keep B in the lead, I vote we take Sansa and Jayne with us along for the ride.
    >> Brick 09/14/11(Wed)04:32 No.16290605
    We should visit the keep. See if Sansa and Jayne want to go, as they aren't teaching at the academy right now.
    >> 風林火山 09/14/11(Wed)04:33 No.16290608
    Well looks like B it is.

    I guess we should bring Jayne and Sansa. Since Catelina is basically a child, could we bring her along as well? heh.
    >> Anonymous 09/14/11(Wed)04:34 No.16290617
    I say B
    >> Pax !uGYNBMPzOs 09/14/11(Wed)04:45 No.16290696
    >>16290608
    >she's really more of a particularly petite girl (about Lenas size) but sure

    You spend quite a while looking over the map and information, before replying "The Keep at the head of the Boreodoth looks to be the best choice. And yes, I would very much enjoy a trip to inspect the place. I believe that you will be teaching myself, Jayne and Sansa how to ride Valkeries... and Catalina how to properly be carried by a rider, if she is not too large."

    Janos thinks for a while before replying "She should not be too much extra weight, considering that she barely looks to be of age, let alone her age. We can leave by morning the day after tomorrow, if the training starts today. I would gather up your ladies if I were you."

    Smiling you reply "I will have them in the main yard once we have all eaten."

    >well, I think this is as good a place as any to call it for the night.
    >someone archive please
    >I'll be back Sunday at 9pm server time (I got school shit thursday night unfortunately)
    >if you have any setting/CQ questions just email me at [email protected]
    >> Anonymous 09/14/11(Wed)05:05 No.16290806
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